Bonjour, je passe une évaluation orale où je doit parler de Martin Luther King pendant 2 minutes, j'ai fais un texte et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai fais des faute
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Bonjour, je passe une évaluation orale où je doit parler de Martin Luther King pendant 2 minutes, j'ai fais un texte et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai fais des fautes ou pas, histoire de ne pas apprendre n'importe quoi ( parce qu'il faut passer sans la feuille) J'aimerais aussi quelques conseil sur la prononciation! merciii !
I'll talk about Martin Luther King
Martin Luther King was born on january 15th in 1929 and he was assassined on april 4th in 1968 in Tennessee.
His parents was Martin Luther King and Alberta Williams King
He maried with Coretta Scott and they had 4 childrens.
Martin Luther King was an American Pastor, he fought against racial segregation and discrimination.
He Never used violence and he received the nobel peace prize.
He said the famous speech " I have a dream " and become famous because he fought for freedom.
I choose Martin Luther King because i find he has done a lot of effort for freedom.
I have finish.
I'll talk about Martin Luther King
Martin Luther King was born on january 15th in 1929 and he was assassined on april 4th in 1968 in Tennessee.
His parents was Martin Luther King and Alberta Williams King
He maried with Coretta Scott and they had 4 childrens.
Martin Luther King was an American Pastor, he fought against racial segregation and discrimination.
He Never used violence and he received the nobel peace prize.
He said the famous speech " I have a dream " and become famous because he fought for freedom.
I choose Martin Luther King because i find he has done a lot of effort for freedom.
I have finish.
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1. Réponse Anonyme
En premier à la place de "I'll talk ... " tu pourrais mettre "I'm going to talk about..."
His parents were ....
He was married to ou he married Coretta ....
They had four children sans -s .
Il n'y a pas de fautes dans la phrase "He never used violence..." mais cela mais en opposition les deux choses (pas de violences et prix nobel de la paix) il faudrait reformuler la phrase.
and became famous because of his fight for freedom.
I chose ou I have chosen, la fin de la phrase je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire.
And that's all pour la dernière phrase.
Voilà ! J'espère t'avoir aidée ! :)
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